Thursday nightlife

[danielle]

Attracted
glimpsed
desired
approached
responded
talked
waited
whispered
suggested
smiled
initiated
forced
held
grabbed
kissed
scratched
moaned
unzipped
caresses
licked
gasped
unwrapped
stroked
rubbed
squeeze
mounted
whimpered
thrust
screamed
shivered
conquered

[Steve]

sorry it took me so long to check this, i hope you still pop in.

i read this and, well, i was awed man. really, the ubruptness of the lines...words just set the tone and beat.

in other words, i loved it.

[jen]

i glanced at this and thought i'd hate it but i didn't.

it has nice rhythm and pace.