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danielle Guest	taj mahal Oct 22, 2005 19:29:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by danielle on Oct 22, 2005 19:29:24 GMT -5 letters are read words are assumed sun is hidden behind clouds feathers are plucked one by one falling disheartened to the ground

Steve Administrator Snoo! Posts: 230	taj mahal Oct 23, 2005 0:22:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Steve on Oct 23, 2005 0:22:38 GMT -5 i really like the (forgive spelling) rhythm of this poem, especially the first two lines and the last stanza, though said stanza is very depressing. i love you poetry and think you should post more ;D

danielle Guest	taj mahal Oct 23, 2005 18:08:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by danielle on Oct 23, 2005 18:08:01 GMT -5 thank you but i think your missing the titles importance in the poem

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